Shankar oda number a mobile la irunthu delete senjatha suthama priya maranthuta. She was busy with her studies (idu verum scenenu than... nambidathinga) until she was in need of a software. Time to call our hero back. Ivara poi koopidanuma nu oru kashtam... but no other go... manasa thidapaduthi epadiyo koopitachu. He also accepted to come home.
Oru naal thedir nu veetu calling bell adikuthu.... ding..... ding......
Velia poi yarunu partha..... namma Hero ... Style a ninukitu playing with my Dog(ROVER... idu Dog ku kudukara intro..... :D). He installed the software and also talking to me nicely. Apo naan hero kita oru formalitykaga ethavathu sapiduringala nu ketka.... He asked for Coffee. Pona poguthunu potu kuduthen(inum potu koduthukitu iruken..... :p).
Shankar kita etho pesitu irukum pothu priya shankarkita avar akka son Birthday ku Treat keta... Inturn Shanakar asked Treat from priya for her akka's daughter. Sari nu priya accept senjitu appa amma kita permission vangita.
Inda iadtula mukiyama oru vishayam sollanum ..... Something made Priya to add Hero's number again to her Contact list(is this the starting point for Love?? (or)iduku aporum apo apo computer repair aagum... adikadi call seiya vendi varuma??)
Oru naal treat kuduka mudivu senju velia meet pannanga. Treat mudinjathu... Rendu perum avanga avanga vetuku poitom.
Aniku evening oru 7 o'clock call from Shankar....
Priya : Yes. tell me
Shankar : Thanks.
Priya : Why??
Shankar : For your Treat.
Priya :Hmm. Hereafter I will not talk to you. (idu chumma build up.)
Shankar : Ok ...Ok.. I'll never tell.
Priya : Thats Good. So when you are going to give me treat for your Nephew??
Shankar : Soon. Ok Bye..
Priya : Ok. Bye.....
Conversation ended and they continued with their work. Suddenly hero kita irunthu oru message ..... Saptiya ... ena panra?? nu....
This day is the beginning of the Story.... namma hero and heroine மனம் vitu pesa start senjitanga. They started to share everything. They started to sleep by 2 or 3 every night. By this time hero has accepted to give treat to heroine.
Rendu perum treat pathi pesikitu irunthanga like where to go, where to meet etc., apo namma priya ku oru puthu doubt, shankarkita ketka thayangi ketuta.....
Priya : Naa ungala ena nu koopilam?
(Hero on the other side laughed a lot and told me inturn....)
Shankar : You can call me as you want...
And they waited for the next day for them to meet each other...
The next day they met for treat and they returned home and days passed very fast which made us very close friends.
To be Continued...
4 comments:
:) :) :)
Story sense was nice....... but ithu avasara avasarama ezhuthina maathiri irukku :) the natural flow in ur 1st episode is shlightly missing :)
btw...this doubt is only for u... (may not be for publishing purposes) disjointed ah irukkae..... enakku oru alavukku un story oru maathiri theriyum..... athula enakku therinja oru episode ithula mention eh aagaliyae :) thatz not for public ah ??
Incredible work priya..you make the picture run in the reader's mind, with your words!! keep it up dear!!
adu enda episode subu?? or else it may be coming in the later post(s).
Post a Comment